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Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movies do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples

With Hollywood growing bigger than ever before, a wide variety of directors have come into the industry to produce unique
films
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. Plots of
movies
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 nowadays range from a very basic one made to entertain a family to a much more complex one with a more serious tone created to make
people
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 ponder over its
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. I like
movies
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 that have a serious tone as well as make a person question its
plot
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 In
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 essay I will discuss why I prefer
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films
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 with suitable explanations and examples.
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, I like
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 that make an individual think about its
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 because
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 it allows the
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 to connect with the story on a deeper level because they are looking at it from their point of view.
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, a film like Tenet, which was released in 2020, had one of the most confusing plots in modern cinema. When the public came together to discuss the story, it got a lot of attention as
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 were discussing their own interpretation of the movie.
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, similar
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also
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 brought
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 closer together during the covid-19 pandemic as
people
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 all over the world came together to discuss its confusing
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.
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, I prefer serious
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 as it brings the
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 closer together to discuss its
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. and allows them to form a deep connection with the story.
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, watching
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 a cinema helps boost the viewer's emotional intelligence as the characters written by the screenwriter are very complex. A survey conducted by Oxford University in 2019 has concluded that
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 with complex characters built up at least 78% of the
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's emotional intelligence.
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, these statistics only held true if the viewer thought deeply about the film.
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, these
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 can help the public realise the issues about the real world as the conflict in these
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 might occur in reality as opposed to a comedy movie. In short, these
movies
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 can be beneficial to an individual as not only does it helps them increase their emotional quotient but
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 helps them realise issues happening in reality that needs to be addressed. In conclusion, I prefer serious
movies
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 as opposed to comedy
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, as they can connect with the
audience
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 in a better way and help increase their emotional quotient.

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