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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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These days, Youngsters are no longer interested in reading
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 or watching
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 programs on television. Two major causes can be attributed to the current situation.
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 evolution and currently excessive life patten.
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, there are several reasons why
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 are not being read by young
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 in many countries. The most prominent factor is that the evolution of information
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. They can read
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instant updated
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 on the internet due to the speed of lifestyle nowadays. To clarify more, everybody has one gadget in his/her hand,
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 is one of the causes
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 no longer love to read from
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. Information
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 replaces successfully printed
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 and
people
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 can read their preferences
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 on their mobile.
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,
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 have lack of patience to read long reports.
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, traditional
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 has its own style in terms of the topics published in it. New generations are more likely to read about what they are interested in
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 as celebrity’s
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, football, and the latest
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 which is not available on printed
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 richly.
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, the lifestyle of new generations is completely different from the previous generation. For more illustration, the way the press displays
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 on papers is limited and familiar with local
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 only sometimes. They need to learn how to enhance readers in terms of various topics and choose attractive types of
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 ,
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, political and business do not become common for youngsters as football and
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. In conclusion,
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newspapers
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 start to disappear and replace it with online
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 due to lifestyle speed and information
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 trends. Printed
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 has many approached to follow the demand different types of subjects.
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