Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre to save money. Write a letter to your council. In your letter -Give details on how you and your family use the centre. -explain why the centre is important for the local community. -describe the potential effects on local people if the centre closes.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to request for reconsidering the decision made by society authorities, to shutdown the Rehabilitation club
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cost-saving purposes. Being a daily member of
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centre,
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gives me great pride to engage in many sports activities and
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I motivate my family members to spend some concrete time here.
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would help us to train for better health prospects.
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weight for three years. I have been her mentor and guided her to play table tennis and been using running paths for becoming better than yesterday.
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club, being the home of various physical activities and
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offers benchmarking classes in yoga and meditation. The majority of us
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would like to utilise these facilities for maximum. For an instance, One of my neighbours
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had met with an accident. Doctors have recommended starting walking after 6 weeks. He has utilised the walking path of
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place, which was indeed a saviour for him. To mention,
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large facilitated house open of general people
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will lure them to have a healthy goal in life; and
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, there is no other nearby gym is competitive enough. Closing of
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will result in a huge imbalance towards one's mental health and others whose immunity is compromised by chronic disease. Yours Sincerely, James.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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