The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

The art of educating a child has been a
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for parents and teachers. Due to
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both education from home and from
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are completely important and necessary so that create a good person to live in society, but is
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that teachings from parents have more impact on
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life.
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. Nowadays educational
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are increasingly present in
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of toddlers and teenagers. For
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is kept and stimulated at
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should teach and promote good habits like the use of expressions “thank you”, “please”, “good morning” and so forth among children, but tasks are responsibilities from parents. The more good examples children have inside of their home, the better conditions
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adult has become a good person for society. The presence of educational
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that child learn about of
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and how to live in society. In the present days, fathers and mothers are even more overwhelmed with all needs of the family and much time they try to transfer the care and responsibility of their kids to
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which is a huge mistake once it should not be seen as the major sponsor but as
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extra support.
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, it is in a family environment that the child learns, copies, and transmits actions learned.
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, a kid absorbs information and
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with more facilities during lovely moments with family and siblings rather than sitting in a bank of the educational
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. Because of
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, I agree with the teachings from family is moderately more influential than the learnings from
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the family as the
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are extremely decisive for the growth of kids, though the nuclear family being much more significant for creating good examples and personality.
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. In my opinion, they are moderately more impacted rather than the
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