Prevention is better than cure".Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.

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disease

are known to be cheaper than putting in research and treating

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disease

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some people think that “Prevention is better than cure”.

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, while I agree that some

diseases

can be prevented by taking essential

steps

, I believe that some

diseases

are inevitable. With regards to

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prevention, there are many

steps

an individual can take to safeguard themselves

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certain

diseases

such

as AIDS. As many of

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know that it is a deadly

disease

and can be transmitted due to multiple reasons,

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usage of

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syringes on individuals, not using a condom during intercourse, and so on. By taking precautions it can be prevented as it is a known fact that the Doctors or Microbiologists are yet to find a cure for

this

life-threatening

disease

and the cost involved for survival is steep so the only way to deal with it is to take precautionary

steps

.

On the other hand

, there are some

diseases

that are inescapable and can not be prevented under any circumstances. Cardiovascular

diseases

such

as heart failure, strokes and some

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of cancers are some of the examples of

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diseases

. The number of

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has increased massively in the recent past and has left everything scratching their heads to find

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the reasons behind it. Some people believe that the major reason behind

this

is the rising levels of pollution which

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affecting the health of

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. As human beings, we do not realize how pollution is affecting our cardiovascular health;

therefore

, it can not be prevented. In conclusion,

although

there are many

diseases

that are preventable by making changes in our lifestyle, eating habits, sleeping

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patters

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etc., there are

diseases

that are inevitable and can not be prevented. The Government should realize the impact of pollution and should take

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steps

to save

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from the fatal

diseases

caused by it.