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Prevention is better than cure".Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.

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Introduction
The measures to prevent
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disease
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 are known to be cheaper than putting in research and treating
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disease
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 and for
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 some people think that “Prevention is better than cure”.
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, while I agree that some
diseases
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 can be prevented by taking essential
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, I believe that some
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 are inevitable.
Body paragraph 1
With regards to
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prevention, there are many
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 an individual can take to safeguard themselves
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 certain
diseases
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such
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 as AIDS. As many of
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know that it is a deadly
disease
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 and can be transmitted due to multiple reasons,
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 syringes on individuals, not using a condom during intercourse, and so on. By taking precautions it can be prevented as it is a known fact that the Doctors or Microbiologists are yet to find a cure for
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 life-threatening
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 and the cost involved for survival is steep so the only way to deal with it is to take precautionary
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.
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On the other hand
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, there are some
diseases
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 that are inescapable and can not be prevented under any circumstances. Cardiovascular
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 as heart failure, strokes and some
type
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 of cancers are some of the examples of
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diseases
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. The number of
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 has increased massively in the recent past and has left everything scratching their heads to find
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the reasons behind it. Some people believe that the major reason behind
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 is the rising levels of pollution which
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 affecting the health of
man kind
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mankind
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. As human beings, we do not realize how pollution is affecting our cardiovascular health;
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, it can not be prevented.
Conclusion
In conclusion,
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 there are many
diseases
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 that are preventable by making changes in our lifestyle, eating habits, sleeping
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patters
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 etc., there are
diseases
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 that are inevitable and can not be prevented. The Government should realize the impact of pollution and should take
necessary
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steps
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mankind
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man kind
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mankind
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 from the fatal
diseases
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 caused by it.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

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  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proactive
  • preventive measures
  • lifestyle diseases
  • public health
  • healthcare expenditure
  • cost-effective
  • chronic conditions
  • early detection
  • immunization
  • health promotion
  • risk factors
  • non-communicable diseases
  • disease surveillance
  • preventive diagnostics
  • health literacy
  • universal healthcare
  • primary prevention
  • secondary prevention
  • tertiary prevention
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