A lot of money is spent on renovating old buildings. We should knock them down and build modern ones instead. To what extent to you agree or disagree with these statements

It is an often argued issue whether a huge amount of capital is spent on renovating an orthodox

buidings

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buildings

or would be built modern ones.

However

, I strongly disagree with

this

statement for the following reasons.

To begin

with, certainly, "old is gold" the traditional

buildings

are the most significant to compared new ones because those

houses

have much more bonding with ancestors emotions

thus

, we never ruined to that one.

For example

,

an

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Eiffle Tower is one of the

world

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worlds

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wonders everybody knows very well but

this

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these

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wonders had

build

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built

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in our ancestors period

subsequently

, they have alternated some

eventhough

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even though

,

this

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wonders are always special rather than new modern

houses

. To be more precise, many historical apartments cannot destroy fully but we could be renovated.

Moreover

,

an

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orthodox

bildings

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buildings

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have a good style of architecture compared to nowadays. They had built a huge apartment even they did not use any kind of technology even though, those

buildings

being strong and today people do not know about what the material had used.

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,

in

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India has so many traditional

architecture

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those

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are more than

hundred

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a hundred

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years above age

although

,

their

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there

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cannot

ruined

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any apartment

but

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they can renovate to that

houses

.

In other words

,

this

kind of house has many

tradtional

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traditional

values,culture,

herritage

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heritage

and pride

hence

, we never

destory

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destroy

any kind of conventional method of

buildings

and we never do the new one in

same

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place. To conclude, certainly, an alternate the

houses

need a massive amount of capital, those

buildings

have much more values and close bonding with our

grand parents

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and

this

reflect

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reflects

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our

grannys

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granny's

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acrhitecture

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architecture

architectural

skill.

Hence

, I strongly disagree with

this

statemennt

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statement

. I hope

this

trend is conducive to the

next

generation.