A lot of money is spent on renovating old buildings. We should knock them down and build modern ones instead. To what extent to you agree or disagree with these statements

It is an often argued issue whether a huge amount of capital is spent on renovating an orthodox
buidings
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buildings
or would be built modern ones.
However
, I strongly disagree with
this
statement for the following reasons.
To begin
with, certainly, "old is gold" the traditional
buildings
are the most significant to compared new ones because those
houses
have much more bonding with ancestors emotions
thus
, we never ruined to that one.
For example
,
an
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Eiffle Tower is one of the
world
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wonders everybody knows very well but
this
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wonders had
build
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in our ancestors period
subsequently
, they have alternated some
eventhough
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even though
,
this
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wonders are always special rather than new modern
houses
. To be more precise, many historical apartments cannot destroy fully but we could be renovated.
Moreover
,
an
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orthodox
bildings
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buildings
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have a good style of architecture compared to nowadays. They had built a huge apartment even they did not use any kind of technology even though, those
buildings
being strong and today people do not know about what the material had used.
For example
,
in
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India has so many traditional
architecture
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those
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are more than
hundred
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years above age
although
,
their
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cannot
ruined
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any apartment
but
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they can renovate to that
houses
.
In other words
,
this
kind of house has many
tradtional
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traditional
values,culture,
herritage
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heritage
and pride
hence
, we never
destory
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destroy
any kind of conventional method of
buildings
and we never do the new one in
same
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place. To conclude, certainly, an alternate the
houses
need a massive amount of capital, those
buildings
have much more values and close bonding with our
grand parents
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and
this
reflect
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our
grannys
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acrhitecture
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architecture
architectural
skill.
Hence
, I strongly disagree with
this
statemennt
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statement
. I hope
this
trend is conducive to the
next
generation.
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