You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: 1. Details about the conference- 2. Why you want your colleague to give the presentation – 3. What arrangements you will do for this conference

Dear
Mr.
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Smith, I am pleased to inform you that the conference on ‘The use of IT in the modern era’ that I have been planning for the
last
month will be held on 23rd July
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2021 at the Star Plaza at 6pm. As you are well aware of the latest developments in
this
field, I am writing
this
letter to request you to give a special presentation
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lecture during
this
corporate event. Regarding the reason
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your involvement, / Due to/ Owing to your experience in Social-media marketing, I think it would be extremely enlightening to hear you talk about its impact on
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small and
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businesses.
In addition
to
this
, if you can educate our audience about the ways
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how to use
this
powerful platform to expand their ventures, it would definitely make
this
corporate event a huge success. With regard to the arrangements/ In order to ensure that there are no delays, I will book a taxi service to pick you up and
also
drop you off after the seminar. Apart from
this
, there will
also
be a celebratory dinner for the speakers, and you will be compensated for the precious time and effort that you dedicate
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the preparation of
this
speech
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talk. I am eagerly waiting for a positive response from you. Yours sincerely, John Doe
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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