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In many countries plastic bags are main source of rubbish causing pollution in oceans and on land; therefore they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Restricting the
use
 of
plastic
 covers and bottles, will defiantly scaledown the originating cause of increased toxicity in water and land areas. I agree with
this
 notion,
this
 would certainly broader our ways to
use
 other eco-friendly, Biodegradable materials. Though
usage
 of
plastic
 cannot be wholly avoided. As we grow in society, many of us find
usage
 of
plastic
 resources are tech-savvy and provides ease for carrying along. In one instance a recent survey has shown significant data, where around 70 per cent of people do not carry their own
bags
 for shopping purposes,
Instead
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 they prefer to buy
plastic
bags
 from groceries stores. The purpose of these carry baggage suffices once the customer reaches home with goods. These
bags
 are generally wasted and cannot be renewed. I would suggest, imparting mandatory rules to replace these
bags
 with Jute made, paper made storage
bags
. Another challenging situation while in a beach location, many of us do not carry any meals from home.
This
 gives an opportunity to buy in drinks and meals,
generally
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 these items are available in
plastic
- Since it ensures the long term freshness of the eateries. I think beach society can packing materials to paper-based, and
also
 can make
use
 of banana leaves. These are the best alternatives to safeguard the environment from spreading toxicity. Thought,
usage
 of
plastic
 cannot be overturned in all sections, like in pharmacies. It
this
 mandatory to
use
 sterile
plastic
 covers for medicines, But
such
usage
 may not have a humongous effect on nature.
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