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Since most information about culture and history can be found on Internet and museums are not in need to what extent do you agree and disagree

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Nowadays, it is believed that there is no need
of
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museums
 as vast
information
 regarding culture and
history
 is available on the
internet
. I beg to differ with
this
 statement and
this
 essay states reasons for disagreement by stating major advantages of visiting
museums
 rather than reading about culture and
history
 online.
Firstly
,
museums
 are centres filled with
information
 designed to educate creative and curious minds. Visting a museum allows people to learn about diverse cultures in detail.
Museums
 preserve religious, cultural, and historic
items
 from the past and keep them safe for research and entertainment purposes and one should
definately
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definitely
 visit
museums
 physically to experience the sheer beauty of these
items
.
Moreover
, schools organise trips to
museums
oftenly
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often
 as a recreational activity for children and they gain vast knowledge and learn about different communities and historic personalities. In the recent past technology has taken over and mankind is inclined towards learning everything digitally which has a detrimental
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affect
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 on health and people tend to forget about culture and
history
 in
this
 fast-paced world. There is no doubt about the fact that most of the
information
 is available on the
internet
 but on the
flip-side
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 the
information
 can not match the feeling of experiencing
items
 from the
history
 as the
items
 can not be felt on the computer
sceen
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screen
scene
. There are a lot of
items
 in a museum
which
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 are larger than life which can only be appreciated by looking at the item rather than reading about the size on the
internet
. Conclusively,
museums
 are a beautiful place to visit with friends and family and it is an educational experience
which
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that
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 can only be felt by physically visiting them.
Information
 can be gained from the
internet
 but the
items
 can not be felt online. It is always worthwhile to stop by and enjoy the greatness of the
items
 from
history
.
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