Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As a matter of fact,in
this
day and age,businesses have been expanding day by day,
however
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some
companies
can'
t
tolerate
this
process and they disappear. In fact, the number of
companies
increases.There are various causations on
this
matter as an example more people desire to get high rate incomes, some people decide
this
verdict suddenly and so on.I have read that from different books,blogs,
that is
why the
companies
can'
t
stand in the competition.As there aren'
t
correct plans for work,as well they don'
t
realize attitudes the other
companies
and budget aren'
t
enough.
In addition
, a person is to predict an outlay, income.Because
firstly
time everything is uphill because nobody knows your a company, an obligation,quantity and so on.Managers don'
t
plan exactly and a company can'
t
progress and collapse.Nowadays, unlegal competition is increasing so
companies
have to make an effort to defend themselves and create attitudes with protective structures.On the one hand, after a
while
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they will collapse .
On the other hand
,
government
companies
can flourish easily.I believe that there are some reasons
for example
they can relate to international
companies
conveniently,as they know one another.On top of that,personally, I think that
government
companies
can get money from the budget of the country easier than the others.They are popular in many countries.
Thirdly
,a large company started everything from zero,
also
I am of the opinion that they had an affirmative plan for improving.As far as I understand,most people like to rely on
government
companies
or big
companies
than individuals. Weighing up both sides of arguments,I mustn'
t
admit absolutely,only
government
or large
companies
can progress.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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