Nowadays some people choose to live in the city while other chooses to stay in the countryside. What are the the advantages and disadvantages of city living over living in the countryside?

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An increasing number of people prefer to live out of the
city
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as it is calmer, safer and cleaner.
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, others prefer the
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instead
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, since everything is within reach
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and the fact that a
city
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is full of life and can have whatever a
person
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needs. On the one hand, being out of the
city
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brings with it the peace and
saftey
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safety
that many
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.
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: a
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residing in the countryside will be more in touch with
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nature and away from the
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noise and traffic.
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, the countryside brings with it cleaner air and water when compared to the
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. Saying that
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being in a rural area means you are away from many of the
facilites
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facilities
and
services
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that can be found only in a
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, a rural
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might need to travel to the town
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to buy food and home stuff
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or to get their mail. 
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, living in the
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allows the
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to be more in touch with international events, and have
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easier access to more
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. As living in a populated area, you will have more
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in an arm-reach,
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as having access to fast internet, more places to visit, and more
shoping
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shopping
options.
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, most of the important government
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are usually located in a
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.
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being in one, means you can have quick and easy access to many things that you cannot find in the
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countryside
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, more and more people are moving to the
city
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, bringing with them more traffic, noise and pollution.
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, you have to live with thousands or even millions in a smaller space. In conclusion, living in a rural area rather than the
city
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is an
intersting
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interesting
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. As residing in the
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country side
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countryside
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brings with it
the
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peace of mind, better air and water quality, and less traffic - it takes away the many
services
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and support systems available in the
city
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