The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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growth of obesity in society will cost a lot to the healthcare system in order to battle

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the health problems.Many believe that the introduction of physical education in the school syllabus is the most effective method.In my essay I'm pointing out the factors while agreeing on the statement to some extent,

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vital in reducing obesity.

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of all, make more physical

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will make the younger generation grow healthy.

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physical exercises makes younger people

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all the hormones at the required level in order to maintain and grow their bodies

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, it will cultivate the

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of exercising among students so they will continue their

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even when they are grown-ups.Even in the current society people who did sports during their school days continue to maintain their health by doing some sort of exercise.Another benefit is children will get mentally strong when they do physical training which will reduce the

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of them getting obese due to psychological reasons.

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, educating students about the

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critical.Because all the efforts in making children do fitness training will not sustain if they're not aware of

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and its role in our health they will

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on junk food and lean towards healthy foods.When

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the information to their children and

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will be a household practice. In conclusion, I would say that

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obesity and the results will be

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