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Every year several languages die out. Some think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion .

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Numerous
languages
 die out each year. Some
people
 believe that
this
 does not have any importance because if there were fewer
languages
 life would be easier. I agree with it because having fewer
languages
 facilitates connections between
people
 from different countries and make knowledge more accessible to
people
, and
this
 essay is going to analyse and give reasoning to
this
 view. Connections between different nations, which are crucial for trading in a global market, are easier with fewer
languages
 because
people
 can understand each other better,
moreover
, transactions are faster and with fewer mistakes.
For example
,
people
 prefer buying a product from someone who speaks the same language because they feel more confident that the seller understands clearly their request,
this
 is to say, the fewer are the barriers, the higher are the links and trade opportunities.
Secondly
, knowledge, which is crucial for the development of poorer countries, is more accessible to a larger number of
people
, because of the ability to understand information without the need to have it translated,
therefore
 more opportunities for different
people
.
For instance
, nowadays most of the knowledge shared online is in English or French, which means that
people
 who speak those
languages
 have better chances to learn new things, and,
in other words
, to improve their conditions.  To conclude,
although
 some
people
 think that it is important to preserve all the different
languages
, I do not agree with
this
 because life would be much easier for many
people
 due to more and better connections, and more
people
 would be able to learn from a larger number of sources.
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