Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days

supermarkets

are the very

first

choice of any shopper. It is an accepted fact that due to

rapid

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expansion of the

supermarkets

in some countries, many local outlets are losing business. Some people believe that

this

is very harmful

for

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the local

communities

because it leads to the closure of many local

businesses

. I completely disagree with the argument that

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supermarkets

are dangerous for local

businesses

and local

communities

. Many believe that local

businesses

are not able to compete with the

supermarkets

.

Firstly

,

supermarkets

offer low prices because they buy in bulk and get

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discount

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discounts

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from the suppliers.

On the contrary

, a local shopper buying from the same supplier has to pay a higher price and

hence

they cannot sell their goods at cheap rates.

Secondly

,

supermarkets

offer a wide range of products under one roof.

That is

why customers prefer to visit them

instead

of the local shops that sell only a limited choice of products.

On the other hand

, I believe that the expansion of the

supermarkets

is advantageous for the local

communities

.

First

and foremost, it reduces the monopoly of local

businesses

. Now all local people have good opportunity to buy at

low

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and competitive price.

Also

, the local vendors have the opportunity to optimize their processes.

For instance

, in China, local Chinese

businesses

have been

successful

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competing against Wal-Mart, which is the biggest supermarket chain in the world.

Secondly

, by adopting new technology and

new

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way of doing business, local

businesses

can easily win over

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chain

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chains

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of

supermarkets

. To sum up, it is true that many local

businesses

are not able to compete with the

Supermarkets

.

Nevertheless

, it is not impossible.

On the other hand

, the

Supermarkets

are helping local

communities

by offering products at low prices and at the same time they are challenging local

businesses

to improve their processes.

Therefore

, I am of the opinion that

instead

of closing down local

businesses

must learn from the

supermarkets

and put in

effort

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to innovate their processes. In the end, the competition between

supermarkets

and local stores will only benefit the local community.