Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days

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are the very

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choice of any shopper. It is an accepted fact that due to

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expansion of the

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in some countries, many local outlets are losing business. Some people believe that

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is very harmful

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the local

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because it leads to the closure of many local

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. I completely disagree with the argument that

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supermarkets

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are dangerous for local

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and local

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. Many believe that local

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are not able to compete with the

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.

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,

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offer low prices because they buy in bulk and get

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from the suppliers.

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, a local shopper buying from the same supplier has to pay a higher price and

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they cannot sell their goods at cheap rates.

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,

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offer a wide range of products under one roof.

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why customers prefer to visit them

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of the local shops that sell only a limited choice of products.

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, I believe that the expansion of the

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is advantageous for the local

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and foremost, it reduces the monopoly of local

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. Now all local people have good opportunity to buy at

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and competitive price.

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, the local vendors have the opportunity to optimize their processes.

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, in China, local Chinese

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have been

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competing against Wal-Mart, which is the biggest supermarket chain in the world.

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, by adopting new technology and

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way of doing business, local

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can easily win over

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chain

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chains

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of

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. To sum up, it is true that many local

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are not able to compete with the

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.

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, it is not impossible.

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, the

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are helping local

communities

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by offering products at low prices and at the same time they are challenging local

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to improve their processes.

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, I am of the opinion that

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of closing down local

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must learn from the

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and put in

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to innovate their processes. In the end, the competition between

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and local stores will only benefit the local community.