There is a problem today that copyright materials such as music, films and books are freely available on the internet with the result that the owners of the works lose money. Do you feel that this is a good or bad thing?

In today's world, there is an

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emerging

problem that can be clearly observed when copyright materials

such

as music, films and books are freely accessible on different websites.

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whether

this

is a beneficial or

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harmful development.

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First

of all,

to begin

with, the main drawback of

this

tendency is the

fact

really talented people may be demotivated to stop performing.

This

is because of the

fact

that not only do human beings require admiration and feedback but

also

since every work should be paid off.

Therefore

, if those whose materials are stolen and used

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illegally

may feel discouraged from their work.

For example

, during the recent

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a lot of musicians could not get to the top charts since their music

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legal platforms.

Moreover

, another major disadvantage of

this

approach is that it allows competitors to stole ideas and by dishonest

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they may gain

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advantage.

This

is due to the

fact

that if all the information is freely available on the Internet

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anyone

anymore

, including

competitiors

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competitors

, can access it.

Therefore

, a lot of works are plagiarised frequently without legal rights to do so.

For instance

, recent research has illustrated that more than 15% of songs in a music

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industry

are plagiarised

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illegally

. Eventually, to conclude, in my

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the

fact

that various copyright materials are freely available for everyone on the Internet is a harmful development,

firstly

, since it demotivates the original creators from continue doing their work and,

secondly

, it allows competitors and rivals to use these ideas and plagiarise.