Without capital punishment ( the death penalty ) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?

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of crimes are increasing in

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world and with that discussion for capital punishment have

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the judicial authorities of the country. Some people believe that there

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other have completely opposite

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that

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is essential to apply discipline and control for certain types of

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is necessary to control brutality in

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for some type of

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violence. We have seen that violence in society is increasing rapidly. If these types of

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are not executed, there will be the possibility that these types of illegal acts increase.

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for

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such

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rape and murder. And

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amount of

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100 times before

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his or her own life.

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believe that

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is not a solution to diminish serious

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. As we can see the illegal activities are still increasing after implementing

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. They believe that every human being needs a

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chance to live their life happily. There are some other ways

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like

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should be sent to the mine for working hard. These

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of punishment are beneficial for

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society. Eventually,

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culprit realises mistakes and want to start a new beginning. To summarize,

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convincing, each has its own strong point to debate. Yet, I strongly agree that

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supreme for

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like rape and murder which will help to reduce viciousness in the society