Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what context do you agree with this opinion?

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violent crimes have been increasing.

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leads many people to believe that the

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is the only way to reduce criminal offences, while some

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people believe the opposite. I

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the foremost view.

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of all, many think that the

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is of no use to cure violence. They give arguments like no one deserves the

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and rather should be given chance to change themselves. Like they think that most of the time criminals are not in the right frame of mind while they are committing the

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they should be given a chance to reform their lives.

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, there have been incidents where innocent have been sentenced to

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. On the other side, it is necessary to maintain law and order in society or no one would dare to do crimes. The

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generates fear in the mind of criminals.

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, they might think of punishment before planning to do any criminal activities and might not do the

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, the strict punishment for the

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helps in creating faith among the people for the law and order.

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for the Delhi case rapists for their horrible act

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will help create faith in many for the law system.

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help in reducing expenses used after taking care of the criminals which can be used in other beneficial activities. To conclude, the

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might have its some drawback, but I firmly believe that it is the best possible way to fight against the violence and

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. It should be implemented in every nation to have peaceful lives.