There is a problem today that copyright materials such as music, films and books are freely available on the internet with the result that the owners of the works lose money. Do you feel that this is a good or a bad thing?
Copyright
materials
are roaming freely on the internet
these days. It has been an issue for the owners due to the money
that they have lost. In my opinion, this
is considered to be a bad thing, as the authors
of every creation have created their copyright
materials
but they were violated and they also
didn’t get the credit they deserve in a form of money
. In this
essay, I would like to explain further
the reason why free copyright
materials
that have explicitly available on the internet
are bad things.
Music, films, and books were created by the authors
based on their creativity and hard work. It is shown that all the authors
are the aggrieved party due to illegal copyright
materials
on the internet
. I believe that creating copyright
is not easy and it’ll surely cost an amount of money
. For example
, a blockbuster movie costs a lot of money
to produce not just for the set itself but to also
claim their copyright
so none will ever take the credits for something they don’t even work on. So, illegal copyright
materials
are bad because they were violating the patent policies and inflict the authors
.
The amount of effort they have put into should also
be more appreciated and supported by purchasing the legal copyright
they have provided on the internet
. Take Apple Music as an example that has created a platform for us to enjoy all music which we need to pay for to listen as a form of our appreciation towards the artist. Furthermore
, it also
benefits us because by purchasing means we’re buying authentic products. So, that is
why buying legal copyright
materials
are important to support the artists as a form of our appreciation.
In conclusion, these illegal copyright
materials
based in my opinion are bad. Because not only did they violate and aggrieved the artist, but they also
took all the credits away from the artist.Submitted by srikanth923 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
