In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
In some countries, the trend of working or travelling for a year before joining university education is becoming highly popular.
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Working or travelling after high school enables undergraduates to get more knowledge to pursue their race and enables them to choose their correct path according to their passion. They can experience different cultures, traditions and market trends which enables them to pursue their career in more depth. They can learn how to tackle different challenges after they eventually start their professional race. Linking Words
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, pupils at a young age do not have experience dealing with their finances. When they go travelling, they run out of finances and come back home without getting a better understanding of the cultures.
To conclude, taking a year break from studies is good for finding one’s passions but it has lots of challenges. I believe students should know the pros and cons before taking a break from their studies.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...