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You were studying in an English speaking country and suddenly needed to go back to your home country leaving your course incomplete. Write a letter to your teacher to - Thank him - Explain the reason you left without completing your course - say during your course study what did you like most about this course.

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Dear Mr. David, I am writing to you to express my respect to you for teaching me and elucidating the reason for my departure.Your dedication to teaching and unwavering assistance have had a profound impact on my academic growth and personal development. I believe that you can comprehend me. I am so grateful to you because of your attempts.You are the best teacher for me and I would participate in your classes by the end of them if I could. You were always considerate to everything and whatever I had challenges to realize, you elucidated them easily. I express my gratitude for that again. Unfortunately, I regrettably had to make the difficult decision to leave my course abruptly and return to my home country. The unforeseen circumstances that arose necessitated my immediate departure, leaving me unable to complete the remaining requirements of the course. I apologize for any inconvenience
this
 may have caused and assure you that it was a decision made out of necessity. Throughout my course of study under your tutelage, one aspect that I particularly cherished was the interactive and engaging nature of your teaching methodology. Your passion for the subject matter and your ability to impart knowledge in a clear and concise manner made the learning experience both enjoyable and enriching. All of your lessons were so enlightening and stimulating. When you were expressing your insights about a specific topic, other diverse perspectives were shared with me by my peers and not only these broadened my understanding of the subject matter, but
also
 assisted me to think critically more than usual. I am thankful for your understanding and approval. I will always hold lessons learned from you in my heart. Yours faithfully, Kamola Ergashova
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear and distinct idea related to the prompt to enhance the logical structure. Introducing your reasons for departure or aspects of the course you enjoyed in different paragraphs can help with this.
task achievement
Your letter demonstrates a good grasp of task response, clearly addressing all parts of the task. To further improve, ensure that each section of your response - thanking the teacher, explaining your departure, and discussing the course aspects - is balanced in terms of detail and development.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout your writing. Your letter mostly achieves this, creating a respectful and sincere tone which is suitable for the context. To refine further, be mindful of using more formal expressions where appropriate, especially in closing remarks.
coherence cohesion
Check your letter for minor grammatical errors and aim to vary your sentence structures more to enhance readability and engagement.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gratitude
  • premature departure
  • unexpected situation
  • emergency
  • necessitated
  • regret
  • interactive teaching methods
  • diversity of the coursework
  • practical applications
  • material covered
  • guidance
  • support
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