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Nowadays, people can easily find and share information online. What problems can this cause and what are solutions ?

#people #information
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with
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 people can find
information
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 updated
on
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apply
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online. People can get the
information
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 handy rather than visiting the place.
Information
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of
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about
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each
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apply
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and everything in the world can be found online by sitting at one place,through online children can
also
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 study various activities which help them to get more ideas to do something
by
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on
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 their own.
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, if a family wants to go on a tour they can get the
information
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 of that place and package online and book it. If they
donot
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do not
don't
 have any
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 which they are
lokking
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looking
 for so that they can contact them through the phone which is available under the contact section of their website. I think that online
doesnt
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doesn't
 cause any problems rather than issuing any payment on the wrong website that may cause
theft
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a theft
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 to the
person
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personal
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 account. Except
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this
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,this
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 the online
information
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 is very useful in
this
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 generation.
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