• An increasing trend nowadays is for young adults to play computer games. some people say this is negative development . Discuss and give your opinion.

In

this

technological era, advanced gadgets attract younger minds.many argued that excessive use of computer

games

obtain a detrimental effect on youngsters.I agree with

this

statement because the technology has many drawbacks, which

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in the paragraph and state my opinion. Fi ,and playing

games

, which might affect their career and health as well. Playing video

games

impacted their health in many ways like it will affect their mental well-being ,physical illness. sometimes it causes big issues like obesity, heart problem.

secondly

, the access usage of the

games

will generate many arduous in education.They become less productive in their studies and use the grip in subjects.

For instance

, according to one survey , 75% of students spending more than 10 hours in video

games

. which led to them being addicted to it.

secondly

, children have good grasping power than adults . They can easily learn the new technology.

That is

why they get addicted soon as well. there are more chances of losing fitness. It directly impacted health , sitting in one place for more than 5,6 hours , causes our body.

In addition

, youngsters getting difficulties in their work or job.

For example

, In Japan 80% of students ,who below the 25 age suffering from eyesight problems and obesity. In conclusion , technology has some advantages but there are

also

negative effects , which may lead to the biggest problem in the very early stage of life.I would like to recommend that , youngsters should play video

games

but only for a limited short of a time period.