Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays the vast majority of Companions tend to represent their
products
through
advertisements
. Meanwhile, some would argue that
this
trend has had a significant role in terms of encouraging
people
to purchase things, whereas others believe that advertising has become
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prevalent so
people
don't consider them. In my opinion,
although
both aforementioned notions have their merits and demerits, the
first
notion has been supported by stronger reasons to accept it. On the one hand, there are obvious reasons why some
people
believe that the impact of advertising is being vanished.
Firstly
, negative
advertisements
including unreal matters and poor quality about many
products
, have been produced and published enormously which has contributed to
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a sense of dishonesty in their audiences. Under
such
circumstances,
this
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of marketing can be converted into
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manner which not only would not
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to attract customers but
also
it might discourage and frustrate them.
On the other hand
, other backing advertising as an important way of selling
products
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that proper
advertisements
have a constructive impact to boost
people
's attraction and thereby increase the rate of
products
' sell. It has meant that the more companies try to produce high-quality
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commodities and publish them, the more they can observe
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positive outcomes. To illustrate,
for example
, the BMW Company has demonstrated the latest model of its hybrid cars through advertising on social media, which has totally been designed and manufactured
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environmental observations as well as being user friendly for drivers. So
as a result
due to compliance of the final car with its original concept, it is expected to be very popular among advocators early. In conclusion, I would maintain that despite the demerits of adverse
advertisements
and their negative influences on their markets, high-quality
advertisements
conveying a sense of honesty and correctness have imperative impacts on
people
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towards shopping.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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