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Many people say that the life of people who live in the large cities is not comfortable. What are the reasons behind this? What could be the solution?

#people #life #cities
In
this
 modern
time
, few
people
 believe that
life
 in the cities is not comfortable. but they face many troubles staying there. There are many causes of staying in urban places.
However
, it can be resolved by taking necessary actions. There are various reasons which make
people
’s
life
 unbearable while staying in the cities.
Firstly
, it has hectic traffic. As the population increases in urban places, it creates a lot of development but at the same
time
, during office hours, It takes long hours to stay away from home which includes
traveling
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time
 and office
time
 and it wastes unnecessary
time
 for the
people
.
Also
, city
life
 has more opportunities in many fields and entertainment like late
night
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nightlife
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life
, weekend parties, and so on. But, it destroys the peace
from
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 their
life
 and disturbs their routine. It can impact their career, education, and work. It has made
people
life
 miserable and create trouble in their health especially anxiety, depression
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are
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 major mental health issues. so, these are the severe problems which make
people
 unhappy. Certain actions can be taken to tackle the above issues. In the
first
 place, the government should provide more frequency of public transport in peak hours. It will reduce commuting in
the
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private vehicles. They should provide more facilities during
traveling
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travelling
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such
 as reading books, soft music.
This
 can help
people
 to relax after tiresome work and utilize the
time
 during
travelling
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time
.
Secondly
, the city government officials should strictly publish night guidelines for parties,
functiotions
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functions
 and any other programs.
This
 will help
people
 to avoid unnecessary outside travelling and it will improve the habit of sleeping early which reduces stress, and unnecessary chaos. In conclusion, urban places make
life
 noisy and unhealthy. It can cause stress and impact
on
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daily routine.
An
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Individual can make a choice according to their priority by taking part in various activities. They can socialise, make new groups which can support them anytime. Government can be more open with individual ideas which can be helpful to society.
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