Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, sporting gatherings have become popular all over the world.

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has made several mega-companies

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advertise their products at

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events

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some individuals believe

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to be harmful to sports, I partly agree with

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, as it can be both beneficial and disadvantageous to sports. On one hand, people are of the opinion that advertisement made by large companies during sporting

events

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reduces the thrill of

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games. Breaks which are supposed to be short are elongated to promote various brands.

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, increasing the waiting time for spectators.

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, motorsports had 4 breaks of 10minutes duration each.

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, with the introduction of Pepsi and

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brands into the mix, the breaks have been increased to 20 minutes each.

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has frustrated the spectators leading to people boycotting

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events

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and leaving earlier than they planned.

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mega-companies have created wealth for the stakeholders in

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events

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in turn helps to increase the salaries of athletes who participate in these

events

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, football has been said to be the richest sport in the world.

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is because

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every club are backed by a rich enterprise who advertise their products on the jerseys of every player in a team. The more large companies advertise in sports, the wealthier the athletes become. In conclusion,

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people are of the opinion that

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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283 words

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