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Some people belive that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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It is true that no job is bad and that all serve to maintain the economic state of a family, but you should not settle for what you already have, it is always better to seek new opportunities that help to improve.
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 whit the people who say that it is always better to try to improve the situations. In my opinion, it is never too late to improve situations and when an opportunity presents itself, you have to take advantage of it. It is good to have economic stability, but it is not good to be satisfied with little or with the basics when you can exceed expectations. A clear example is those people that we know today for their achievements, artists, scientists, etc. they are an example of why we must continue to keep doing
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 advantage of opportunities and improve situations.
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 for the whole family, the
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 it is important to keep in mind that they cannot stay in their comfort zone, they have to look and analyze the opportunities and difficulties that will come, but never give up. For
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 there is nothing more satisfying than to be able to say, thanks to my effort I made it.
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