People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?

Nowadays the consumption of

sugar

-based drinks has been increasingly popular among

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people of all ages. Due to

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huge variety of drinks available in many different places, people consume them

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large

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scale which

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became

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damage

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people`s health.

This

essay will discuss why people are consuming more and more

sugar

-based beverages and what could be done to reduce the consumption.

Firstly

,

sugar

drinks are present

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everywhere, because of

this

the access to them is even easier and frequently. The reasons for

this

current issue could be explained not only for the low prices but

also

for the celebrity endorsement.

Although

health organizations try to keep the population loop with negative sides of

sugar

overdose, social media and large companies make the opposite,

in other words

, they promote the

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with a low price and misleading

information

about the product. For

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, at

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, place where the price is written in big and catching letters, but the

information

with calories, fat,

sugar

and so forth is reduced in minimum letters to

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by the consumers. In sum, the use of

sugar

in huge quantity in some beverages has been present among in the individuals which result in an uncontrolled overdose. The more

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social media endorses the use

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, the more society believe that it is ordinary and healthy.

Secondly

, the government should create laws more severe about

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uncontrolled use so that companies must be punished for unrespect them. These laws should be about the misleading

information

given by companies and perhaps about the prices.

In other words

, society should be informed about the real effects of

sugar

in their body before they have access

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product full of unreal and unhealthy

information

.

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, an aware person about

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of

sugar

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certainly would be a person more prepared to make good choices about

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sodas and foods, which

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in a society more healthy. In short, if there were laws more rigid about

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the disadvantages

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of

sugar

,

population

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should not consume

sugar

sodas

in

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large

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a large

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scale. In conclusion,

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many

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sodas at

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the supermarket

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supermarket

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supermarkets

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with an excessive quantity of

sugar

, which leads to soaring of high consumption by

population

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the population

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.

This

essay argued why individuals are consuming

this

kind of liquid with more frequency and what could be done to stop the overdose.