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More and more plastic is polluting cities, countryside and oceans in the world. What are the problems caused by plastic wastes? What measures should be taken to solve it?

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In recent years, there has been a marked increase in the production and consumption of
plastic
, giving rise to environmental problems.
This
 essay will discuss the main problems associated with
plastic
 wastes and propose some possible solutions to avoid them. Using
plastic
products
 leads to detrimental consequences for the environment. The
first
 problem is the contamination of soil and water. After being used,
plastic
products
 deadly waste in landfills and the ocean, which is unable to decompose in a short time.
Second
, the overuse of
plastic
 disturbs the ecological balance. Because the floating
plastic
 bags bear a strong resemblance to
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jellyfish
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jelly fish
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jellyfish
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, water animals
unfortunately
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 can not distinguish and eat thousands of tonnes of
plastic
 per year. Some of them are in the red book, vulnerable to extinction. In a bid to cure the environment, visionary leaders should consider taking appropriate actions.
First
, authorities should encourage people to use environmentally friendly
products
. By using leaves or paper bags
instead
 of
plastic
 bags we can reduce a considerable amount of
plastic
 waste every year. Another step to deter people from consuming
plastic
products
 is to introduce laws on
plastic
 consumption. The stricter punishment is, the
less
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 people use
plastic
products
. In conclusion, non-biodegradable waste causes great damage to the environment. Soil and water pollution and ecological imbalance are the results of
increased
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the increased
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 use of
plastic
products
.
However
, upon the enforcement of laws and the promotion of environmentally friendly
products
, we can mitigate the damage.
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