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Some people think the newly built houses should be the same as the old houses in local areas. Others argue that local authorities should allow people to build houses in their own styles. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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 some people believe that the new home should be built in the same
style
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 as the more traditional local homes, others believe that everyone should have the freedom to choose their own
style
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 of home. I agree with the opinion that new buildings should be built in a traditional
style
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 to preserve their culture. On the one hand, some people believe that embracing change and allowing people the right to live in a modern-
style
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 home is essential, if they so choose, no matter where they are. They
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 tend to reject traditional ideas on the basis of construction costs. Traditional building materials,
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 as natural stone from local quarries, are difficult to obtain and very expensive even if available, while new
houses
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 are built with more affordable materials. Compared to modern
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, maintenance costs for
houses
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 built the old way are usually higher.
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, now in house construction, wood is usually replaced by
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 or plastic materials.
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, there are strong arguments that the new house should adopt the existing local architectural
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. Regarding the material cultural heritage of small towns or villages, traditional
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 have their own characteristics and give the place a strong sense of identity. Historic buildings are the link to our roots, and modern properties designed by real estate developers are definitely incompatible with historic links. From an architectural point of view, the modern
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 to the traditional
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 are dazzling. They cannot be integrated with the organic growth of housing, perhaps for centuries. In short,
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 it may be more expensive, modern housing development must respect local traditional architecture.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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