Many people are afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime. While others feel that little action can be done to stop crime. What is your opinion?

In today's world, it is believed by some part of the population that some more

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actions

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should be taken to prevent

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while others claim that these measures are not able to cope with these issues.

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of all,

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with, the main reason why it is important to intervene is that the

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government

can improve the quality of work of

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.

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is

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of the fact that not only can the authorities increase the budget being spent on police stations but

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it is able to develop

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system in

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sphere.

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, if policemen will perform better there is

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likely

unlikely

to be fewer criminals on the streets.

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, in Ukraine, after the introduction of

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a

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the level of

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has fallen by 10%.

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, another cause why actions should be taken to prevent

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is because by organising appropriate work with

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a psychologist

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at schools the country may prevent violent actions.

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is due to the

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fact

that not only may children and teenagers have the opportunity to tell

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about

what worries them but

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they will receive a psychological

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assistance

timely.

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,

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approach is likely to be able to stop violent thoughts and decrease the number of crimes.

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, scientists claim that when humans are able to discuss their problems with a psychologist they are less likely to commit a

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. Eventually, to conclude, in my

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more actions should be taken to prevent

crime

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because,

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,

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the

government may invest more

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into

in top

the improvements in the sphere of police and,

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, there may be a development in the work with psychologists.