Many people are afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime. While others feel that little action can be done to stop crime. What is your opinion?

In today's world, it is believed by some part of the population that some more
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should be taken to prevent
crime
while others claim that these measures are not able to cope with these issues.
First
of all,
to begin
with, the main reason why it is important to intervene is that the
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can improve the quality of work of
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.
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of the fact that not only can the authorities increase the budget being spent on police stations but
also
it is able to develop
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system in
this
sphere.
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, if policemen will perform better there is
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likely
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to be fewer criminals on the streets.
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, in Ukraine, after the introduction of
such
a
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the level of
crime
has fallen by 10%.
Moreover
, another cause why actions should be taken to prevent
crime
is because by organising appropriate work with
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a psychologist
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at schools the country may prevent violent actions.
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is due to the
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that not only may children and teenagers have the opportunity to tell
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what worries them but
also
they will receive a psychological
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timely.
Hence
,
this
approach is likely to be able to stop violent thoughts and decrease the number of crimes.
For instance
, scientists claim that when humans are able to discuss their problems with a psychologist they are less likely to commit a
crime
. Eventually, to conclude, in my
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more actions should be taken to prevent
crime
because,
firstly
,
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government may invest more
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the improvements in the sphere of police and,
secondly
, there may be a development in the work with psychologists.
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