It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist.

It has been suggested a topic for discussion, some
people
think that if a person desires to get luck in various categories
for instance
in a sport, art, music and the
others
. They ought to have got
potensial
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potential
. The
others
bilieve
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believe
that
people
can earn achievements if they work out strongly. My own view on
this
matter, I agree some
people
are able to be taught by teachers or the
others
.
First
of all, I believe that everyone has got abilities
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determine
level
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,
nevertheless
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some
people
don'
t
believe it or don'
t
work to find out. As a matter of fact, everybody was
borned
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born
bored
same
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level that they couldn'
t
analize
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analyze
, understand, speak and so on. Parents or doctors commenced
to teach
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some actions little by little. We can see that everything begins from "zero",
however
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needs to try and
to
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be patient. The
others
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one of
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examples A child doesn'
t
know when he or she goes to school
first
time, but afterwards start to learn
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.
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, personally, I
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believe
that each person has
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learning
capable balance as a pattern
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a person can pick information better or
quickly
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than other peoples. I don'
t
think
this
situation illustrates talent. Probably there are some reasons as an example to work more time,
afforts
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efforts
and so on.
People
can get more data about sports art and so on.
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depends
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working time,
learnin
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learning
methods, will and
the
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others
. Because if there is talent, some
people
need'
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needn't
need
t
have
working
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and they sit down only. To sum up, I think talent isn'
t
crucial and it is impossible that earn abilities from other
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • natural talent
  • innate ability
  • genetic predisposition
  • nurture
  • nurturing
  • develop
  • cultivate
  • foster
  • encourage
  • inherit
  • unravel
  • reveal
  • demonstrate
  • evidence
  • proof
  • counterargument
  • counter
  • overcome
  • compensate
  • arguably
  • debate
  • controversial
  • persuasive
  • convincing
  • conclusive
  • critical
  • essential
  • crucial
  • vital
  • significant
  • prominent
  • noteworthy
  • imperative
  • compulsory
  • fundamental
  • compelling
  • persuasive
  • support
  • favor
  • oppose
  • disagree
  • acknowledge
  • consider
  • claim
  • view
  • belief
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