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fact that human's actions are causing irreversible damages to the earth.
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the possible causes and what can be done about that problem.
Firstly
, one of the main reasons is the
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of fossil fuels used trowed to the atmosphere, because many of nowadays's activities
high quantity of carbon gas,
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industries and the traffic are
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part of the role, which leads to a worse scenario of climate change.
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, CO2 is
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responsible for 60% of the greenhouse effect.
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deforestation
also
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global
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, once the
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green zone controls the temperature and weather,
consequently
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balance affecting
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all eco-system.
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first
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gas emission, as the population needs to find a way to develop without compromising the world,
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government should encourage
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studies about
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. To illustrate, there
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several
within the automotive industry,
such
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solution is to increase the re-forestation movement
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since it is necessary to repair the damages already done,
therefore
, the administrator should create reward programs for those who
action.
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role on that
journey to raise population awareness,
human-made actions and engage new
.