There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?

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fact that human's actions are causing irreversible damages to the earth.

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the possible causes and what can be done about that problem.

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of fossil fuels used trowed to the atmosphere, because many of nowadays's activities

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high quantity of carbon gas,

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industries and the traffic are

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part of the role, which leads to a worse scenario of climate change.

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responsible for 60% of the greenhouse effect.

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deforestation

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green zone controls the temperature and weather,

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balance affecting

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all eco-system. The

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gas emission, as the population needs to find a way to develop without compromising the world,

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studies about

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environment

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electric

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solution is to increase the re-forestation movement

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since it is necessary to repair the damages already done,

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role on that

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journey to raise population awareness,

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human-made actions and engage new

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