When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is often argued that it is more important to choose a
job
with high
wage even if it doesn't appeal Correct article usage
a high
you
.I completely disagree with Change preposition
to you
this
perspective and I believe that job
satisfaction
is more than salary
.
We must acknowledge,i
think that Change the capitalization
I
job
satisfaction
gives people to sense of fullfilment
and happiness that no money can guarantee.If someone gets high lucrative wages but feel tensed on workplace and compromise with his conscience.Correct your spelling
fulfilment
Thus
that person will never enjoy his work while pursuing one's interest will always bring feeling
of contentment.Add an article
a feeling
the feeling
For
example
Add a comma
,example
alot
of famous researchers made their career choices Correct your spelling
a lot
not
because of appealing wages , but because they were passionate about science.Add the comma(s)
,not
Therefore
, it is more important to choose that
kind of work that makes you happy and satisfied.
Correct determiner usage
the
Secondly
,doing what you like keeps individual
motivated and productive .Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
In other
words
there Add a comma
,words
are
strong relation between Change the verb form
is
job
satisfaction
and productivity.People who loves
their jobs ,can easily excel in their fields and achieve better results than those who consider the Change the verb form
love
salary
on
Change preposition
in
first
place ,even though they have Correct article usage
the first
interest
in their Correct article usage
an interest
job
or not.For instance
,many scholars decide to leave their jobs despite a good wages
and ventured to become a scientist and after enduring ups and down they become one of the most famous and Correct the article-noun agreement
a good wage
good wages
well paid
scholars.Add a hyphen
well-paid
Thus
,jobs that keeps
you satisfied are far much better Change the verb form
keep
Correct your spelling
than
that
the high Correct your spelling
than
salary
packages in long run.
To conclude ,I strongly believe that job
satisfaction
is more beneficial Correct your spelling
than
that
Correct your spelling
than
high
Correct article usage
a high
salary
.This
is because it makes people happy and motivated.Submitted by Ripan on
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