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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Studying online is becoming increasingly popular. Some people believe that online schooling is so beneficial that traditional classroom-based learning will be replaced while others do not.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence as to why e-learning will substitute
face
 to
face
education
. To being with, more and more people are choosing online
education
 for they have the chance to save
time
 and arrange their daily
time
 schedule as they want. Nowadays,
time
 is a valuable resource that why e-learning has been a huge benefit for those who always are in a rush
,
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 because they can watch the classes whenever they desire. Despite a huge number of
undergraduate
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 have to work, in order to pay for their scholarship, now they all are able to keep doing both activities without any problem.
Also
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 the amount of
time
 that
students
 can save
as a result
 of not having to travel any more can be spent in their personal lives. In many universities, a surprising increment in applicant’s solicitudes for their online courses has been registered.
As a result
, most of
this
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 educational institutes have to reorganize some of their
face
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 to
face
 classes into
an
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online courses so as to keep receiving more
students
.
On the other hand
, those who claim the opposite believe that traditional
education
 is the best way for
students
 to develop their social skills. Learning in a traditional classroom-based course make the
students
to
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interact not only with the professor but with the others learners too. Rising abilities
such
 as, how to express an idea, working in groups or just making a friend, are vital things that will help them in their future.
For example
, in a wide variety of jobs working as a team is something natural. If someone never underwent
in
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this
 kind of
activities
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, the group will have more problems in order to achieve their goals.
Hence
,
face
 to
face
education
 makes
students
 learn about a particular subject while they develop
another abilities
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. In conclusion,
i
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 believe that e-learning is the future
for
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education
 because it
allow
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 us to spend our
time
 as we wish. People will be able to study from their homes and enjoy these extra hours. Despite some of
they
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 may have a job, now, with the help of
the
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technology they can
also
enroll
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 in a course in order to keep learning.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-Learning
  • face-to-face education
  • remote learning
  • virtual classroom
  • webinar
  • digital platform
  • self-paced learning
  • interactive learning
  • course accessibility
  • academic networking
  • pedagogy
  • synchronous/asynchronous sessions
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • edtech (educational technology)
  • holistic development
  • practical skills
  • collaborative learning
  • digital divide
  • curriculum adaptation
  • technological literacy
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