you and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. you are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.

Dear Danny, I am writing
this
letter to complain
some
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furnitures
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that you have in your place. I am Nari HWang and as a tenant living in one of your properties. My parents and I
are living
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near
Stadiun
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Stadium
Station. We met to sign a rental contract a week ago at your office. I have to tell
and
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suggest something about bad condition
furnitures
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. First of all,
There
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are a dining
table
and
chairs
in
living
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room. But we are living 6 people together so we don't feel that
this
table
size is fit and suitable for us. In
additioon
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addition
,
threr
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there
are only 4
chairs
and one of the
chairs
is
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broke down. Three
chairs
are missing so we need 3
chairs
more.
Due to
a small
table
and missed
chairs
, we haven't
have
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dinner time together for a
while
. We need a big
table
and more
chairs
as soon as possible. As you know, Family time is so precious. I hope you are going to purchase some
furnitures
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that we want as soon as possible. I am looking for your answer soon, If you have any questions, just let me know. your faithfully, Nari Hwang
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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