You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend.

Dear Nari, I hope all is well with you. I have good news and want to let you know as soon as possible. I

finally

got permanent residency from

Canadian

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the Canadian

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government a few weeks ago. There are many excellent benefits for people who are able to

live

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apply

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apply

permanent

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permanently

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. For most of them, one of the best things is a super mortgage loan from any bank.

Therefore

, I applied it a week ago and received it 3 days ago.

In addition

, as you know, I lived with

roommate

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a roommate

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for 3 years,

I

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and I

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had no own space for a

while

. I wanted to live alone

from

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apply

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this

year. In the end, I found a suitable apartment for me through my realtor. In terms of my new apartment, It is a high-rise complex and located

in

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next to Stadium Station. It has a huge bedroom,

small-sized

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a small

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den, a living room,

kitchen

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a kitchen

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and one bathroom. I think

this

structure is perfect for people who want to live by themselves.

Last

but not least, our building has a huge Gym, a big sauna and a meeting room as well. If you have free time these days,

i

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I

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would like to invite you to my place

on

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apply

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this

weekends

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weekend

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. I hope to hear your reply as soon as you can and if you don't make it

this

weekend, let me know when you are available to visit my place.

cheers

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Cheers

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, Amy