People who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what do you agree or disagree?

Most

of

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people

learn lessons through

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mistakes

. It is often argued that communicating with the

prisoners

helps the youngsters to walk

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right path. I think it has both significant positives and negatives which I will discuss in

this

essay.

Firstly

, A lot of

mistakes

we made is mostly in our teenage because we have no idea regarding the consequences. So, due to many issues in our young age

such

as anger, detachment with parents, lack of education and lack of control at that moments leads to many crimes.

However

, one can learn a lot of

things

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young age itself. So, It can be learned when we hear the persons who

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mistakes

.

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it is a great idea to talk with

prisoners

as they can clearly explain the moment which

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them

to

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do

such

mistakes

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life in prison along with

this

they can

also

explain

about

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the

sufferings

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from

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our dear one's.

For instance

, My hometown has a central jail which is eminent in our state. So, there is a petrol bunk in which the

people

who work there are

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prisoners

. Despite

this

, once

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had

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communication with them, I have learned

lot

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of

things

from them and

i

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controlled my anger.

Thus

, talking with them helps us to learn

our

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mistakes

. While

,

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are few negatives that all the persons in the prison may not be good. They might have some bad

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intentions

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intensions

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. They might be rude

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others who visit them. They might not suggest good

things

which helps for their future because they are not much educated as well as they think they are doing good like these

type

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of

people

are

self-centered

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.

Furthermore

, talking to them makes young

people

to

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learn

such

type of behaviour as it is the correct age which we learn by seeing others. In conclusion,

This

communication has both points . To my knowledge, I think that some group of

people

should be selected who has good mark and reputation in the jail.

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type

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of

people

can explain how

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life is and how

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mistakes

can be done

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a fraction of

second

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. Interaction with the good

prisoners

helps the teenagers to learn the best

things

in their

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lives

life

lifes

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.