In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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THAT IN MANY COUNTRIES A SMALL NUMBER OF
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EARN EXTREMELY HIGH SALARIES.
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ESSAY WILL SHED LIGHT ON IF
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IS GOOD FOR THE COUNTRY OR IF THE GOVERNMENTS SHOULD NOT ALLOW SALARIES ABOVE A CERTAIN LEVEL.
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WE HAVE TO SAY THAT THERE ARE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN PUBLIC
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A GOOD SOCCER PLAYER OF ITALIAN SERIE A CAN
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A VERY CRAZY HUGE
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FOR A MEN THAT JUST GIVE TWO KICKS TO THE BALL BUT IT IS
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FOLLOWING THAT PLAYER, BUYING SEASON TICKET FOR THE STADIUM OR SUBSCRIPTION FOR WATCHING MATCHES ON TV. SO THE
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MAKE HIS
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HUGE. THE REAL PROBLEM ARE NOT HUGE SALARIES BUT
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MAKING MONEY WITH STRATEGIC BUSINESS. AN EXAMPLE IS
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PETROL. EVERYONE NEED PETROL, WHY
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PRIVATE COMPANY HAVE TO SELL PETROL TO
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? SHOULD BE THE GOVERNMENTS TO CONTROL
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TYPE OF BUSINESS AND AVOID
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MAKING MONEY ON STRATEGIC PRODUCTS. IN MY
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IT IS RIGHT
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EARNING
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • incentivize
  • discrepancy
  • inequality
  • social cohesion
  • equitable distribution
  • wealth concentration
  • talent retention
  • global competitiveness
  • social unrest
  • innovate
  • government intervention
  • salary cap
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