The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

One point which I believe to be pivotal is the fact that prevention is better than cure. By maintaining proper

health

,

people

can find themselves living longer, healthy

lives

,

also

prohibition is cheaper in comparison with treatment during serious illness.

This

essay will discuss why

such

prevention is eventually essential and how government funding can help create

such

measures.I completely agree that

this

is the best way to tackle the issues of deteriorating public

health

.

Health

maintenance typically consists of methods or activities that seek to reduce the predictable

health

problems and avoid medical treatments and medicine consumption.

This

method can reduce the significant economic burden of diseases.

In addition

to improving the length and quality of

people

's

lives

.

For example

, tobacco consumption is injurious for

health

; avoiding it and doing regular exercises and following other steps can significantly reduce your chances for illness or early death. Annual check-ups, as well as specific tests and screenings, are a few examples of preventive care. It

also

is called routine care and is vital to reduce predictable problems.

Hence

prevention care programs are required.

On the other hand

, nations must provide funds to an allocated stream to improve their

people

's

health

. It will help in preserving uncertain fatal diseases

such

as COVID-19.

For instance

, India is a vastly populated country;

however

, less than 3 % of its GDP is spent on public

health

;

on the contrary

, countries like Canada spend more than 10 % of their GDP on public

health

.

Thus

, because of the shortage of resources, In April

,

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2021, India had suffered

devastating

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loss of human

lives

during the

second

way of COVID-19. For all

such

reasons, government funding is a mandatory element in tackling

health

problems and maintaining good

health

for their community. To conclude,

People

are equally responsible for preventing their own

health

and following healthy measures.

However

, there are some sections of the society

who

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do not have enough funds to take early steps;

hence

it is the government's responsibility to allocate funds for their community to prevent their

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lives

during pandemic situations.