The best way to protect the environment is to use local resource, such as food or building materials rather than transporting resources from other places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that the safest means to keep the

environment

safe is by using commodities produced

within

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instead

of transporting

goods

and services from one

place

to the other. In

this

essay

will

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I fully agree with

this

measure. The consumption of locally produced

goods

has many advantages and is stressless compared with transporting resources from

place

to

place

.

Also

, consuming locally produced

goods

and services helps in recycling

wastes

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in the community. A hygienic

environment

is very suitable for inhabitation.

This

is because the inhabitants will ensure that their surroundings are deprived of hazardous materials.

For

instance

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consumption of local produce

go

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a long way in ensuring that nations

the

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best and

utilizes

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everything around them. In the ancient days when transportation was poor, the public was only able to consume what they produced.

This

was either because of the distance or language barriers. With current trading and

transportations

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, some countries dump

goods

they no longer need.

Whereas

the nations who need them do not see

this

as hazardous until a much later time when there is an outbreak of disease.

Therefore

consuming local

goods

will prevent the dumping of unwanted

goods

in the community where a safe

environment

would have been suitable for the people in the locality. Another reason in support of the use of locally produced commodities is that some of these are very rich and the quest for money will make local producers sell the best and depend on the

not so good

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ones.

For example

, fishermen do not feed on the best catches. They will rather dwell on those which are not okay for the market to make money. No wonder why children of fishermen look malnourished compared to children of non-fishermen. Where there is no transportation from

place

to

place

, those in the locality will enjoy the items manufactured within. Libya once practised it. They extract their crude oil, refine it and use it. Yet they rank among one of the richest countries in Africa. Where locals depend on what they

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, they thrive well in them and their originality cannot be compared with another.

This

is very rampant in communist countries like North Korea, Russia and China.

Therefore

, to be a wealthy person, one must depend on materials sourced from around the

environment

. conclusively, utilizing local resources is helpful in not only providing a safe

environment

but

also

in providing healthy foods to the people

as well as

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selfsustainence

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self-sustainence

. I truly agree with

this

.