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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The acceptance of
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. some people say that it is
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best to accept a bad
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 while others believe that it is better to try to improve them, but how to know which is the best decision? Everything depends on the
situation
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, a person who is in a bad economical place,
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which pay them better so he would have to accept it because it is better to have at least enough money to eat something than nothing. Obviously, the best thing to do
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is to try to improve but maybe the
situation
 is bigger than it seems to be. A personal experience is in
this
 school at
first
, I wasn't doing it too well and I did try to improve it, but it was too late, so I just had to accept it and be better for the
next
 time. As a lot of people have said before in I believe it's a fact but we learn from mistakes the life is a constant test and if we fail it's okay you just have to learn from your mistakes and keep going, keep trying and there are going to be situations in which you will want to give up and it's perfect because we are not robots but you have to keep it up and continue and as my mother say “live your life because anyone is going to do it for you”.
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