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Studyingabroad is thought by many students to be the best way to get a good education. On the other hand, somestudents believe that studying in another country has many drawbacks. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is generally argued by some that the best to obtain a good education is studying overseas; diametrically opposed to
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, others propound the idea that studying
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 is disadvantageous. Notwithstanding that both sides may advance equally compelling arguments in support of themselves, I personally incline towards the former for the rationale follows. On the one hand, it is a fact beyond dispute that there are a number of reasons why studying
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 has more advantages. The prime reason is that they want to broaden their complex understanding of majors.
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, overseas
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 have more lucrative job opportunities than domestic ones because current companies prefer candidates having global qualifications.
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, not only do they speak native languages fluently, but international
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also
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 show that they have solid professional skills.
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, there are many job details about IELTS teacher vacancies showing that applicants possessing diplomas from foreign universities are preferred.
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, a majority of
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 decide to study in a foreign country which creates an environment where enrollers can study and apply themselves to enhance their occupation prospects.
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, there is no gainsaying that studying in another country brings many disadvantages.
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 may face culture shock when they
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 a new country, which may leave negative influences on their mental health. The
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 drawback is
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 language barrier.
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 an exam-driven curriculum is in English, a communicative language is a local tongue.
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, if a student from
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 on studying
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 in Vietnam, you have to learn Vietnamese though you are taught in English. To conclude
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, whilst there exist
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 stances on the matter, it is taxing work to determine which may be more positive. Howbeit, in view of the aforementioned arguments, my unshaken conviction is that
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 should study
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 for better promotions in
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their career
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