Some people think the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet to obtain information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, the phenomenon that people arguing whether the government are responsible to build free
in each
has aroused wide concern among various circles. Some people believe that building free
in each
is necessary based on the equality of education. Meanwhile, there are some voices
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suggestion does not make any sense as the Internet act as the same role as the
, which you search for any information without a step out of your home. Considering both sides of the argument above, I totally agree with the idea that the government should provide free
in every
. Of the reasons why free
are essential in each
, probably the most significant one is that it allows poor students who are not able to afford
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to learn and search for information. It is crucial that education should be the fairest way and the most easily accessible way for the underprivileged to climb up the social ladder in order to strive for an improvement in the quality of life. In
case, free
are the critical existence for those students to learn and gain new knowledge
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public libraries
  • community centers
  • educational programs
  • democratize access
  • socio-economic status
  • resources
  • reliable internet access
  • digital infrastructure
  • forward-thinking
  • technological advancements
  • digital literacy
  • online educational resources
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