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Some people believe that parents should teach Children how to be good members of society however others believe that school the place to learn this discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People
 differ
greately
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greatly
 whether good manners should be to
children
 by
parents
 or educational institutes.
This
 essay shall discuss both sides of the argument followed by my own opinion that teachers can teach students in a more formal and disciplined way. On one hand,
people
 who advocate that
parents
role
 is more vital in
children
 social behaviour may argue that
children
 consider their
parents'
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 as
role
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a role
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model
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. As young
children
 imitate their
parents
' and
thus
 learn from them how to react in various social situations in a most positive way.
For instance
, most of the
children
 start their education at the age of three and till
then
 the only teacher is their guardians who imbibe and cultivate basic manners in them.
Therefore
,
parents
 can guide them to become responsible
people
 by setting examples in real life
scenerios
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scenarios
.
On the other hand
, others argue that school can provide a more formal approach to help Juvinials in becoming responsible citizens of society. These institutes use more tested and tried methods to guide kids in developing
attitude
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attitudes
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 towards other
people
.
For example
, they can use daily activities
such
 as
role play
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role-play
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 and effectively teach them
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a right
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 response to various
practicle
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practical
practice
 issues. In my opinion,
school
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schools
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 play
more
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a more
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 vital
role
 in guiding their pupils due to their formal techniques and including
it
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them
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 as part of
curriculum
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the curriculum
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.
Moreover
,
inability
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the inability
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 of
parents
 on account of their busy working schedules increases the responsibility of these education departments to inculcate good manners in them. To Conclude, while
parents
 can become
role
model
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models
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 for their young
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 it is
school
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a school
the school
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who
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that
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 can teach them in
more
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a more
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 formal approach and help them to become
gracious
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a gracious
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member
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members
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 of society.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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