Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that it is best to accept a bad situation meanwhile others think that it is better to try and improve, from my point of view both arguments are valid and has good reasons, but
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the person and the specific situation.
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if you fail
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exam and you have the opportunity to take the test again, but if you get a lower grade
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in the past you are going to lost all the
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, so, in
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you can present the test again or leave the grade you already have, in
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type of situations you have the opportunity to improve or be satisfied with the grade that you get. If we analyze both perspectives has advantages and disadvantages, the way I see the things in
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to improve and search
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solution, when you try your best and you put
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it is more likely to get better results,
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will not happen in all the situations, maybe in some cases you try and try and the results aren´t good so you feel frustrated
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but I believe
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the person, the situation and
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the problems
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way they search
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, sometimes
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good to eave something when it
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to affect your health or your emotions.
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