Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want . Is this a good way to raise children ? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older ?
Nowadays, it is said some parents raise their
children
by buying them whatever they ask for and allowing their children
to do whatever they want. This
essay will shed light on this
type of parenting and the consequences when the kids will
get older. If every time you buy everything that your child asks you, they will never learn to fight and work hard to gain what they want. When they Verb problem
apply
will
get older Verb problem
apply
and
they will go out Correct word choice
apply
from
Change preposition
of
the
Change the word
their
childhood's
bubble and they will face the adult world, they will be totally not ready to fit on their legs and they for sure will get depressed and frustrated. A Change noun form
childhood
parent
task is to drive, step by step, their Change noun form
parent's
children
to become self-sufficient and responsible. If they always allow their kids to do what they want they will never learn to respect the rules and the authorities. The best way for
my personal opinion is to allow them to do new activities according Change preposition
in
with
their ages and their reliability. Change preposition
to
For example
, I live in Tully and here there are many rivers with crocodiles, I can not allow my son to go fishing with his friends if I am not totally sure I will not go to do it in a safe place. In
addition
my kid asked me to buy him play station. I did but before Add a comma
addition,
i
said that three conditions that he has to respect to make it happen: 1) He has a new duty, cutting the grass of the garden Change the capitalization
I
ones
every ten days until he turns 18 years old; 2) Studying at least one hour before start playing; 3) Don't play more than two hours a day; Obviously he answered yes and for sure he will disattend one of these rules. Correct your spelling
once
To sum up
, I totally disagree with parents that spoil their children
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