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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To wat extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, it is argued that smacking
children
 is the best form of discipline.
This
 essay will shed light on the positive and negative aspects.
Firstly
, I don't think smacking
children
 is really good, it is always better to talk with them and try to make them understand the situation and what is wrong.
Sometime
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 is hard,
specially
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especially
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 when they don't listen and don't recognise your authority but talking is
only
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the only
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 way to make them really understand and grow up.
For
example
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 when I was
kid
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a kid
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, I
always
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 have been a little rebel and my family used to smack me often to try to avoid me to make
troubles
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. I never changed my attitude because of that but just trying on
my self
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myself
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 the consequences of my wrong actions.
On the other hand
, it is
also
 true that not always is
possibile
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possible
talk
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to talk
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 and make the
children
 understand in
a
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easly
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easy
 way. In
fact
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,fact
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 in
quality
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the quality
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 of
dad
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,dad
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i
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I
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 can admit that
sometime
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sometimes
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 I smack my baby. He is almost two years old and it is very difficult for me
explain
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to explain
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 to him what he
cans
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 do and what not and why.
For
example
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 he used to go to toch the power cords and
obviusly
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obviously
 it was very dangerous, so to make him understand to not do it I sadly had to smack him. In
this
way
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 he
associeted
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associated
 the pain to that type of action and now he has
quitten
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quitted
quieten
quitting
. To sum up, probably smacking
children
 should be the
last
 option always and just when there
are
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is
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not
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no
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possibility
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the possibility
a possibility
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 of
comunication
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communication
.
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