the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

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The bar chart illustrates the point of teams A,
B
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and
C
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in four various
years
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and these
years
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are between 2002 and 2005. Overall, the high rate belonged to
team
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B
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over 4
years
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than the others.
In addition
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, the
scores
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were relatively similar to each other
besides
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2004 in teams
B
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and
C
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. With regards to
team
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B
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, the high rate occurred in 2002 with 82 points,
on the other hand
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,
next
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2
years
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the decreasing shown,
however
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in 2005 again the increase happened from 43 points to 55
scores
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. In terms of A and
C
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teams, the maximum show levelled off to 35 points and
this
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statistic was introduced in 2004, in
team
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C
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had 12
scores
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. The least
scores
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happened in both 2002 and 2005 year with 5
scores
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in the
team
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's A and
C
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. The development was introduced in 2003 and 2004
years
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in command
B
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. What is more, the fall occurred 2002 and 2003
years
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in the command
C
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