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the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

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The bar chart illustrates the point of teams A,
B
 and
C
 in four various
years
 and these
years
 are between 2002 and 2005. Overall, the high rate belonged to
team
B
 over 4
years
 than the others.
In addition
, the
scores
 were relatively similar to each other
besides
 2004 in teams
B
 and
C
 . With regards to
team
B
, the high rate occurred in 2002 with 82 points,
on the other hand
,
next
 2
years
 the decreasing shown,
however
 in 2005 again the increase happened from 43 points to 55
scores
. In terms of A and
C
 teams, the maximum show levelled off to 35 points and
this
 statistic was introduced in 2004, in
team
C
 had 12
scores
. The least
scores
 happened in both 2002 and 2005 year with 5
scores
 in the
team
's A and
C
. The development was introduced in 2003 and 2004
years
 in command
B
. What is more, the fall occurred 2002 and 2003
years
 in the command
C
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