some people believe that after the child begins his/her schooling their teacher will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A set of individuals opine that the teacher becomes more important to the child once he starts going to school.Even though I see a point in the given
opinion
, I cannot totally agree with
this
one.
This
essay would elaborate on my
opinion
. To start with, I believe that teachers become more important in their life due to the value and affection they receive from their instructors.That means
,
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get attached to their instructor at the educational institution as soon as they start attending it.
This
is because of the love and the care these
kids
get from them.
Besides
this
, it is with these people that children spend most of their time other than
parents
.
For instance
, from morning to evening
kids
spend their time at school and
that is
why they get attached to their instructors.
Hence
, some individuals believe that teachers will be given high priority than their
parents
.
on the other hand
, I
also
have an
opinion
that
parents
role cannot be
next
in the line to teacher because of the following explanations.
Firstly
, any major decision in the life of the
kids
will be taken after by their other and father.
As a result
,
parents
are always at the top in nurturing a child's bright future.
Secondly
, it is at home the true nature of the student is opened up and
hence
kids
can move more friendly with their
parents
.
For example
, it is
parents
who knowns their child's personal and social behaviour.So it will be easy for the
kids
to share everything with them easily.These are the objectives that make me feel that teachers cannot influence a kid more than
parents
. To conclude,
this
essay has discussed my
opinion
on the given statement and has elaborated on my
opinion
.
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