Nowadays most information is available online, whereas in the past knowledge used to be stored in books and on paper. Do you think the advantages of this situation is outweigh its disadvantages ?

At present most

information

is available online, whereas in the past knowledge used to be stored in books and on paper. I am of the opinion that

this

has more merits than demerits which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. The

first

and foremost reason is, the accessibility of the

information

has escalated manifold. There are ample

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places

for instance

Wikipedia, Online articles, blogs, social media where there is millions of

information

is available to an individual at

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place and

time

.

In addition

to

this

, the process of finding

information

has declined

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in

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of an individual.According to

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research published by the New York

Times

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the online media are 60 % more reliable

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offline

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in collecting knowledge. Another clear reason is,knowledge gathered from numerous means is more trustworthy.As the records are authentic, a person can easily rely on them.

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, if an individual

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to gather data on

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of a particular medicine, he can access the internet and collect it from trusted websites of hospitals,blogs by doctors or applications.

Moreover

, with these trustworthy

medias

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information

cannot be manipulated by any

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individual

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.So the reliability of these resources

offer

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a person a verified result.

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in

this

digital era,

information

available

from

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online has a greater

time

span

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the

information

recorded on

papers

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.All the pivotal records will be accessible in the future

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so if anyone

need

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it

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in the near future they can easily access them.

Furthermore

, the data cannot be lost from online media as it has the probability to be lost on paper. To conclude

although

there are disadvantages of the subject as

information

can be easily copied, and the data available from these resources

consists

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of old figures,advantages like easily assessable, authentic,

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are

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far more in comparison.